Evaluation AO5
Most of the feedback that I received after presenting my promotional material was positive, although I had a few pieces of constructive criticism. I got feedback off three peers; each gave a different criticism for me to work on.
Tim Davies liked the idea of using YouTube to create interest amongst the target audience, but the album poster lacked information on where to buy the album.
Album Poster (post feedback): Album Poster (original)
I added another tab saying where the album will be available and changed the text colour to red so it stands out against the white. I also added an arrow pointing to this, to draw your attention to where to buy.
Jay Kiss said that he liked the idea of the X-factor performance as it has a huge audience, many of which are target audience for Ke$ha’s music. He also said that the radio interview could have been a little longer and a bit more relaxed, not so formal question and answer.
Original Radio interview:
Radio Interview (post feedback)
Presenter: Now we have a worldwide, self confessed party animal and rock chick in the studio…It’s Ke$ha guys!!! (applause/cheering)
Welcome along Ke$ha, it’s lovely to have you here finally, because we have met a few times but you’ve only just been able to make it onto the show, how is everything?
Ke$ha: Yeah, it’s great to be here, finally! I know I have been hoping to come on the show for a while now and here I am! Everything’s great thanks; I’ve got loads on at the moment so I’ve been a bit hectic, but I took some time to come and see you guys!
Presenter: Ohh thank you Ke$ha, we were so excited when we heard you were coming on the show! So you’ve got a new album coming out haven’t you?
Ke$ha: Yes, I do! I am so excited about it!...My album is called Blow and I have just released a track from it also called Blow! I hope you guys like it!
Presenter: Yes, we will be playing the world exclusive of Ke$ha’s new song shortly! So we’ve been seeing you in the newspapers and magazines, you must be a busy girl!
Ke$ha: Yes I have been!...And it’s not over yet! I have an X-factor performance coming up which I’m so excited about!
Presenter: Yes we have heard!...And that’s this Sunday isn’t it?
Ke$ha: Yes I’m singing my new song Blow, this Sunday at 8.00pm! So I hope you guys will be watching!
Presenter: Yes we will be watching!...Well, we are now going to play your new song Ke$ha, would you like to introduce it?
Ke$ha: Yes ok, here is my brand new song, from my album Blow which is out this Christmas, I hope you enjoy, It’s blow!!!
(Cheering/Applause)
(Song fades in)
Lucy Dickinson said that the presentation on my magazine article on Ke$ha could be improved. The layout wasn’t really in keeping with traditional articles and it didn’t stand out much.
(Post Feedback Article)
I made several changes to my article on Ke$ha. First of all I changed the layout, I moved the image to the left hand side of the page and re wrote the article with the writing going around the image in an article style. I also changed the font of the text to a typewriter style, I felt this would fit the genre better and be more interesting than a generic font. Finally I made the text red, this was to grab the readers attention more, as before it didn't stand out much.
Legal and Ethical
The ASA enforce advertising codes written by the Committee of Advertising practice. This makes sure that the adverts we watch on television we can trust, it makes sure they don’t lie and false advertise these codes would have to be followed when creating teaser videos, advertising Ke$ha's new song. BARB monitors the amount of people watching television, so this would help with the placing of the advert and finding out when would be best to put the advert in and on what channel. CAP is the equivalent of the rulebook for advertising, it creates a level playing field for advertisers and it protects the customers. The Parental Advisory scheme are a shceme that I would have to go through when promoting the Ke$ha's album. http://www.bpi.co.uk/press-area/news-amp3b-press-release/article/parental-advice-on-music-updated-for-the-digital-age.aspx




























